英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Le

英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Le
英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错
我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上
Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin
One day,the sky are black.And I was on my way home.suddenly,a hot girl come along.And she stood beside me.She say,"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I say"no".The the girl get angry and gei me a big 耳光.She say"no You 骗人"she cried and wet away.
After the girl went away,T didn't move a think a moment.Mabe I am
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不会结尾了..还有些单词...
语法错误改改啊~有分++++
我表现的是个笑话...

英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Le
Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin
One day,it was very dark outside(此处用black不太合适).And I was on my way home.Suddenly,a spicy girl came along.And she stood beside me and said:"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I said"No".Then the girl got angry and gave me a big slap on my face.She said"No !You are lying" she cried and went away.
After the girl went away,I didn't move but thought for a moment.Mabe I am
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后面不知道你想表达什么了,你先把故事说完再说
对了,提醒你一下注意时态的运用

Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine. Someone says,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin

One day,the sky is black.And I was on my way home.Su...

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Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine. Someone says,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin

One day,the sky is black.And I was on my way home.Suddenly,a hot girl came along.She stood beside me. She said,"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I said"No".Then the girl got angry and give me a slap on my face。She said"No ~!You are cheating"she cried and went away.

After the girl went away,I didn't move and thought for a moment.Maybe I was handsome.What do you think?

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she said! I said! 你在讲故事！所以都是过去式！！！
then the girl get angry and give me a big slap!
you lied to me !I didn't move and think a while！
结尾~wow！I am so handsome in girl’s eyes~

第一行everybody还有somebody said"the story is funny
第二段the sky was black