children's day英语作文带翻译

children's day英语作文带翻译
children's day英语作文带翻译

children's day英语作文带翻译
In the June 1th.It's children's Day.The children are very happy,because they can sing.dance,eat good food,and so on.In the party,a little boy is stand up,after he say:“Today I am very happy,I want to thank every teacher.”Then the children are very excited.Some children are say a joke.
The children's Day is every boys and girls'day,so I like children's Day,too.
　　在6月1日生效.这是儿童节.孩子们很高兴,因为他们可以唱.跳舞,吃好的食物,等等.在晚会上,一个小男孩站起来,之后他说:“今天我很高兴,我要感谢每一个老师.“那么,孩子们很兴奋.一些孩子在说一个笑话.
　　儿童节是每个男孩和女孩' Day,所以我喜欢儿童节,太.

June ,the beautiful month come again. It is a hot wire to children,because it also means Children's day is coming. That day was a special day. All the things was unusual. Many beautiful snoopies was...

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June ,the beautiful month come again. It is a hot wire to children,because it also means Children's day is coming. That day was a special day. All the things was unusual. Many beautiful snoopies was put up on the wall,and students come to school with good tempers. After class the world becomes the children's world. You could see children every-there. Some children went tu the park with their parents,some went to the zoo,and some went to swim together. All the children's are very happy I feels children's day is the most beautiful day.
参考翻译：
六月，美月再来。这是孩子们的热线，因为它也意味着儿童节的到来。那天是个特殊的日子。所有的东西是不寻常的。许多美丽的斯努皮贴在墙上，和学生来到学校的好脾气。下课后，世界成为孩子的世界。你可以看到每一个有孩子。一些孩子去了公园，他们的父母，有些去了动物园，和一些去一起游泳。所有的儿童都很高兴我感觉儿童节是最美丽的一天。
6月,美丽的月再来。它是一个热丝来的孩子,因为这也意味着儿童节来了。那一天是一个特殊的日子。所有的事情是不寻常的。许多美丽的snoopies被张贴在墙上,学生来学校有良好的脾气。下课后世界成为孩子们的世界。你可以看到孩子们每天那里。一些孩子去公园和父母涂,一些去了动物园,和一些一起去游泳。所有的儿童都很开心我觉得儿童节是最美丽的一天。
6月，美丽的一个月再来。这是一个热丝的儿童，因为这也意味着儿童节即将到来。那一天，是一个特殊的日子。所有的东西，是不寻常的。在墙上，搭起许多美丽的snoopies的学生来学校，好脾气。下课后，世界变成了孩子们的世界。你可以看到孩子每有。一些孩子们与他们的父母涂公园，有的去了动物园，有的去游泳，一起。所有的孩子都非常高兴，我觉得儿童节是最美丽的一天。
错误修改：
分数评语：
69.5
评语： 作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
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1.1
English is a internationaly language which becomes importantly for modern world.
[名词错误] 冠词缺失，建议将modern world 改为the modern world 。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将internationaly改为internationally。
[介词错误] 介词误用，建议将for modern world改为in modern world。
[词语错误] 词性错误，建议将becomes importantly改为becomes important。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: word, vocabulary, language, term, lexicon 均有“文字，词，语言”之意。
2.2
In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn.
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将foreigh改为foreign。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将choosed改为chose。
[名词错误] 单复数错误，建议将many student改为many students。
[动词错误] 建议把 is took to 改成 is taken to/is taking to (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[低频警示] is took to be 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
2.3
They begin to studying English at a early age.
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将begin to+doing改为begin to+do。
[名词错误] 冠词误用，建议将a early改为an early。
[低频警示] begin to studying 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: begin, start, commence, initiate, inaugurate 均含有“开始”之意。
2.4
They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day.
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将use...hour to改为spend...hour in doing。
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，learn...knowledge在本族语中很少使用，建议修改。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识，学问”之意。
[批改提示] knowledge (知识)是不可数名词，一般情况下，不采用复数形式。
2.5
Even kids in kindergarten have begun learning simple words.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 learn...word 在教材中出现过 226 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: foolish, silly, stupid, simple, dull 都可表示“愚蠢的，笨的，傻的”之意。
2.6
That's a good phenomenan, for English is essential nowadays.
[拼写错误] phenomenan 拼写错误，可替换选项为：phenomenon, phenomena, phenomenal
[学习提示] 易混词汇: basic, essential, fundamental, radical, vital 均有“基本的，基础的”之意。
3.7
In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese.
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将superior than改为superior to。
[介词错误] 固定用法错误，建议将in addition to改为in addition。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: consider, think, believe, count, deem, reckon, regard 均含有“认为”之意。
[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。
[批改提示] 注意Chinese和the Chinese区别。
3.8
In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language.
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将in me opinion 改为in my opinion 。
[连词错误] 语法错误，连接词though和but在同一个句子中不可同时使用。
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将in+代词+opinion改为in one's opinion。
[低频警示] after all a foreign language 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。
3.9
it is hard for people to see eye to eye.
[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写
[学习提示] 易混词汇: difficult, hard 均有“困难”之意。
[高分短语] see eye to eye意为：看法完全一致，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！
3.10
English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China.
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 read...works 在教材中出现过 113 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: creative, original, imaginative 都可表示“有创造力的”之意。
[批改提示] true的近义表达有accurate 。
[批改提示] help近义表达有support/ assist/ aid
3.11
Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance.
[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。
[批改提示] 注意characters和character区别。
3.12
Learning a country's culture, especially its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language.
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将is learn改为is learning/is to learn。
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将be learn改为be learning/be to learn。
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，建议将classic...culture改为classical... culture。
[动词错误] 语法错误，be learn不规范，建议修改。
[低频警示] its classic culture 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
3.13
Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
[中式英语] 表达不规范，learn...culture在本族语中很少使用，建议修改。
[拼写错误] 拼写不规范，建议将owne建议改为own。
[句子错误] 句子错误，建议将because of改为because。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。
[批改提示] through的近义表达有across，in term of，via。
提示：中式英语指的是在英语母语用户很少使用的表达，如一些中国特色的表达“改革开放”等，不一定就是错的 。

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