帮我看看这篇英语文章的语法错误 WALL E 的Wall EIt’s a Disney film talking about a garbage-classifying robot Wall E helps people go back to the earth with his friends which wets my eyes several times.As it’s developed by DISNEY and

帮我看看这篇英语文章的语法错误 WALL E 的Wall EIt’s a Disney film talking about a garbage-classifying robot Wall E helps people go back to the earth with his friends which wets my eyes several times.As it’s developed by DISNEY and
帮我看看这篇英语文章的语法错误 WALL E 的
Wall E
It’s a Disney film talking about a garbage-classifying robot Wall E helps people go back to the earth with his friends which wets my eyes several times.
As it’s developed by DISNEY and Pixar,I tend to describe it a fairy tale unlike some fiction or ethics.The little rusty robot has enjoyed hia life by cleaning the earth and collecting funny things for a long long time.One day he meets a perfectly designed robot Eva,who strikes him at first sight.Being different from Wall E Eva carries a significant task to find out green plants.SO when her work’s done ,she has go back to the aircraft which people live in.Inspried by adoration,Wall E followed her,Through difficulties they managed to help those people back to the earth.And they finally belong together with a fairy ending.
It really touchs me at the scenes when the little Wall E take the dormant Eva to see the sunset with blinking colored lights around her,when the little Wall E tried to wake her up calling Eva in a desperate voice,when Eva spare no effort to rejuvenate Wall E and she constantly called Wall E Wall E Wall E .I cant help sheding tears It may be sort of sentimental,but the cute image of wall E and their pure love can hardly give no impact to the audience.

帮我看看这篇英语文章的语法错误 WALL E 的Wall EIt’s a Disney film talking about a garbage-classifying robot Wall E helps people go back to the earth with his friends which wets my eyes several times.As it’s developed by DISNEY and
line 1:"Wall E helps",定于从句先行词在从句中作主语,应有关系代词“who”.
line 2:非线性定性定于从句,想说电影好几次让我的眼睛湿润了,应该在which前面加上逗号.同时建议把句式改为“Wall E,a fantastic film which wets my eyes several times,talks about.”
line 3:"developed"换为“illustrated”
line 3:"tend"换为“prefer”"describe...as..."."unlike"换为“rather than”.
line 5:"enjoy.long long time",改为“enjoy his life through constantly cleaning.”
line 5:"meet"改为“meet with”
line 7:"inspired by adoration"改为,“In great adoration of eva”
line 9:"And they finally belong together with a fairy ending"改为“Finally,the story came to a happy ending which saw their engagement.”
line 13:".I cant help sheding tears It may be sort of sentimental"改为“It may be sort of sentimental,however,i cant help sheding tears.”
line 14:去掉but,"give impact to"改为“have impact on”

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