帮忙看看短句语法错误On contray to the aforesaid,the other people,who strong object to smkoing,think that the government enact the law to ban smoking in public places is mainly for the concern of its people's health which much more precious

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帮忙看看短句语法错误On contray to the aforesaid,the other people,who strong object to smkoing,think that the government enact the law to ban smoking in public places is mainly for the concern of its people's health which much more precious
帮忙看看短句语法错误
On contray to the aforesaid,the other people,who strong object to smkoing,think that the government enact the law to ban smoking in public places is mainly for the concern of its people's health which much more precious than tobacoo company's profit.moreover,the burning cigarettes will pollute the quality of air,so that is harmful for people who do not smoking.

帮忙看看短句语法错误On contray to the aforesaid,the other people,who strong object to smkoing,think that the government enact the law to ban smoking in public places is mainly for the concern of its people's health which much more precious
On contray to (contrary to) the aforesaid (根据上文加名词,如fact,data,etc.),the other people,who strong(strongly) object to smkoing,think that the government enact（government's enaction of）the law to ban smoking in public places(publices 可要可不要) is mainly for the concern of its(its删掉) people's health which（is） much more precious than tobacoo company's profit.moreover（首字母大写）,the burning cigarettes will pollute the quality of air,so that（the somke of burning cigarettes causes air pullution which） is harmful for the people (nearby) who do not smoking(don't smoke).

Contrary to the aforesaid facts, the other people, who strongly object to smoking, think that the government's enaction of law to ban smoking in public is more for the concern of people's health than tobacco company's profit. Moreover, burning cigarettes will pollute the air, which is harmful for the people who do not smoke.